ok first off.....rhyme ur lines
baller...ur opener didnt rhyme....i laughed at the lara croft line that was an ok punch....werk on usin personals and multis....get sum metaphors in ur verse.....u won it barely jus for havin an ok punch...
murdera...u had a lil bit of multis in u opener....ur shit didnt rhyme at all....get more direct punches....u basically jus restated baller's verse...if ur gonna feed learn how to do it first....learn personals...
v/baller
return the favor
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