ok breakdown for ths newbie battle......
Opener - baller...nice opener...lil joe u need werk...
Flow - baller...i felt ya flow cuz most of ur lines werent stretched....lil joe almost allya shit was tretched...baller u also need to werk on not stretchin ya bars...
Punches - baller....u had sum nice punches compared to lil joe....both werk on personals to get better punches...
Personals - neither had ne personals werth a vote in this category...
Closer - baller...well lil joe u cant win a battle sayin shit that includes their mom...
Multi's - neither had better multi's...both werk on this category....
vote - baller....both yall keep elevatin n ull get better....
return the favor in my topical with nope
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118637