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Old 04-09-04, 12:46 PM   #15
anxiety
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From: colorado
IP:

let me state right off that this battle was full of personals and punches, just none of them were really good. Lokie, u had a good verse, but u stayed with the video game concept to much, u should drop something like that after a 2 liner and not go on about it throughout the verse. Vice, u need to stop the shit like, i fucked ur mom and girlfriend, shit is way to played by the newbies here, but other than that, good verse, nice structure (if u understand his structure)

v/vice