ok the breakdown of the battle s like this

OC6-pretty basic but great use of syllables your flow was tight and i really felt the verse for a newbie that shit was tight keep it up work on your multis and personaly

Skillz-where do i start first of all i gotta say that i think u can do much better than that the whole point of rap is to ryhme and i think only one line really ryhmes in verse your skillz will get better just keep working on it. work on your vocabulary, multis personals,metaphors the works. you have the basics down you just need to hoane your skillz and your style

good battle to the both of u

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