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Old 04-09-04, 05:56 PM   #18
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Check Axioms Lines

DJ's chasing a victory, and it's playing hard to get.
I would've ended your career... but it hasn't started yet
So when I trash this fuck, he'll be napping in the ocean.
I don't know what's worse, ya verse, or the fact that you're postin

There u got good word play and a strong punchline

THis line below uses Good Vocab a good punch line.

This battle's regressin, you'll feel bad as gays disperse.
You didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse.

And a strong final verse to finish it all off,

Lets play, like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
Kid just came out of the closet, and it wasn't during hide-n-go-seek

See thast a proper verse, droping decent bars

But D'j Also Had Some Good Punches That Connected and hit hard they were heated, just not enough to take the win' was slackin a little bit, but just lost by a nose

votes should be conucted on

personals: Neither Wasnt feelin em
punches: D,J/Axiom
Flow: Dj Had A better flow
Multis: Neither
Wordplay: Axiom
Lyrical Content: Axiom

Over all .....Axiom

(this is a well explained vote)

Yet Both Verses Were Hot.. And Axiom Just Got This SHit By A Pinch...
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