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Old 04-09-04, 07:42 PM   #8
Cythis
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Maku JaiiLiin-ya shit was tight, but very weak, too much boasting
too little punches, this is the only line that stood out

"Nod ya head d.j em sce, cuz my speach is the truth//
Till ya neck gets stretched like slaves in a sequel to roots"
i liked that, but all over a very weak verse, nice flow but its the punches that aint there4/10

d.j- ya rap was nice, but besides for adding his name to ya shit
their wernt any great personals, you killed him with meti's, wordplay
and punches, i thought wit a name like his you would of hammered more on it
i thought you did very wellll. 7/10

"C you mite say Im an Ill blacksmith the way I com wit sic bars
When dis verbal massacre occurs Maku JaiiLiin is left wit thick scars"
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nameplay^^^^^weak

vote D.j em sce