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Old 04-09-04, 09:58 PM   #7
Afterword
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yo this was a koo battle and u both did ya thang
the ryhme schemes were pretty basic, but advantage to shadow her b/c his flowed a lil better
punches were fair, and again favor shadow to me b/c his were more original, and personal
"got no talent so you wishing it was me that fucked your mother
this shits meticulous, metaphors ridiculous that make your mind’s engine sputter //"
Le u got skillz but just didnt bring yur best here and got slightly (shawdows)edged.
both can step up vocab, althogh it wasnt too basic
vote= shadows edge
just call it how i c it
peace
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