cubed served this other cat
animal need to get more active and add some damn spunk to his flow
that shit was dry as power stick(deoderant)
"I eat to much red meat//
Am gonna threaten ya fire//
with every girls desire//
am gonna giveum ya phone number so you expire//"
-start by steppin up ya vocab, and lenghthen yur lines out

cube u had a descent effort, but still room 4 improvement
gud closer:
If you want, I'll teach you to say things as perfectly as ive sed//
'n' if you wanna lose agen then just open a new battle thread//

call it how i c it
peace
return da favor

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