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Old 04-10-04, 12:59 AM   #24
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yo that was a phat contest, yall both had a cool flow that kept my interest
structure: ima go with monsta b/c karlos kinda stretched his lines a lil, which is coo but i think monsters style was more affective
vocab: neither had a really exstensive use of vocab but again i think this is ad vantage monsta b/c karlos used too many filler words/ opposed to consistant lyricisim
punches: monsta once again just b/c his shit felt more creative and innovative

thats enuf break down, although it was very close
much closer than my breakdown makes it appear
gyd shyt to both

call it how i c it
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