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Old 04-10-04, 02:07 AM   #4
Shadows edge
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oc6: nice punches on 3rd to last and last bars.. got some ok personals in a couple times, once in the opener. had some nice world play and complex rhymes. could use some work on the flow, when one line takes twice as long to say as the other it kinda makes your structure weak, and that second to last bar didn't even have a good punch, surely you could put something better there?

cc: blah.. the personal was weak and the only good punch you had was at the end... copped a joke (r kelly pissin) from dave chapelle... use a played out micheal jackson joke.. overall kinda weak. better flow than oc6, but not enough.

vote: oc6

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