Nyne Myll: You had some alright flow but your punches were kinda basic. You didn't really have any metas or multis and a personal would have been nice. You can't just spit rhymes, you gotta spit them at someone, That's why this is called a battle. One line did stand out to me though........

torturin MC's as if they were Jews and i was a Nazi//
my glock lights up ya block like flashes from the paparazzi//
^Kinda hot.....lol

NeW:BreeD: Your rhymes are all over the place. You never really established a flow at all. I understand that you like to just keystyle and let the typo's go, but no one else understands it. Take your time and reread what you write, it only takes a minute or two. You also had a line that stuck out to me........

ure rhymes are really stupid shit they really silly,
u aint gota gun but a 9 milli willy,
^Only real personal in the battle

Overall, this was two newbs battling who are both gonna get better. That's what these votes are all about. But it is a competition in which only one can win..............

Vote: Nyne Myll for more established flow and punches

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