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From: ☆•°•☆яαρvεяεѕε☆•°•☆ |
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IP:
Aye Yo Check This Shit' ...
Im Going To Tell You "Re$TricTed" You Had Me Lost In Some Lines' ... Because Your Flow, & Your Structure Was Out Of Proportion And Shit' ... But Over All I Liked Your Verse It Was Heated' .. Threw Punches Wich Got Connected... And Hit Hard** But You Do Need To Work On Your Structure A Bit Because It Was A Bit Off Hand' No Disrespect,
Check Re$TricTed's Lines'
Verbally Slay This Cat, Cause All You Spit Is Hot-Air,
Your Ego Is Inflated, On My Level, Bitch Realize, Your Not There!/
^^Them Lines Are Heated Punches That Got Connected (Most Deff Best Lines)
LyriCal Mc I Like Your Style' .. Its A Bit Like Mine' But, It Seems You Hardly Put Any Effort Into Your Verse I Mean The Punches Are There And They Hit, Your Personals Are.. Tight' .. But Come Harder Next Time, Unlike Re$TricTed Your Flow & Structure' Were Cool,
Check Lyrical MC's Lines
The ~R~ At The Rear Of Each Post Has 1 Meaning,
~R~ Equals Restricted To Wack A peach Its Seeming,
He Suround By Bitin' He Has Produced,
Found Out By Profound Biting Re-used,
^^Dropping Decent Bar's And Good Punches' - Nice'Lines
Punches: Re$TricTed
Personals: Lyrical
Structure: Lyrical
Flow: Lyrical
Creativity: Re$TricTed
Character: Lyrical
Lyrical Content: Re$TricTed
Im Going To Have To Go With Lyrical This Time Around With My "Vote" But Re$TricTed' Didn't Loose By Much' ... I Would Say Both Verses Were Heated!! I Enjoyed Both Of Them
Vote: Lyrical MC
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