Dope rhyme, man

First, this rhyme had abundant multies which really stuck out, instigating me to keep reading on and on.

I guess you could try initiating more multies as it proves excellent in your rhymes, though your already a distinguished and exceptional emcee.

Oh and some vocabulary can prove to be decisive at perfecting your skills

Stayed on topic throughout the rhyme without barely leaving the topic, and EXCELLLENT job of expressing yourself, give you mad props dog

Keep flowing, you'll be BEYOND perfect in a while
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Extra Note-Can you peep my rhyme big pimpin, I'd really appreciate it

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