Alright

First-I liked the intro line, great starting line, also like the testicle line, those are the lines that really stood out

But, in the middle it sort of got choppy and faded a little bit, like this line I didn't comprehend

"youll wish that you never had a son when i touched his bro/"

Sort of really forced words in with a desperate aggravation to rhyme words.

Try not to force words, and the flow was lacked in there, try to improve there, and enhance in the branch of multies and vocabulary, it would prove a great, er....metamorphasis in your rhymes(as in elevation)

And I'm being honest, you got bountiful potential, and a few more rhymes and tweaks here and there, you'd really be a better emcee than you are right now.

Keep dropping, I look foward to your other ones


Keep ya head up

Oh and if you got time , try to peep my rhyme, "Big Pimpin"
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note-why you edit it demolish, now I gotta add my feedback to the new part, haha dont sweat it dog, Ill add feedback to the edited part later bro

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