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Old 04-10-04, 12:21 PM   #3
Concrete
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Disaster-Great use of multies and punches, adding humor along with great skill.....dope verse overall, flowed well with excellent structure from the intro to the finish.

Siz-Mediocre battle verse, spotted some forced words in there I think, I'll look over it......yeah I did...and the punches were very basic.

Punches-Disaster took this with a great deal, adding humor, props to dis for that, Disaster takes this catergory.
Multies-I didn't really spot any multies in Siz's verse, if there were any, it must've been insubstantial, anways Disaster had some multies that really stood out, Disaster takes this catergory.
Metaphors-Disaster takes this catergory hands down, just read her verse and you'll know.
Vocabulary-Again, Disaster strikes.....she had a nice amount of mediocre vocabulary words, Disaster takes this.
Flow/Structure-Sorry Siz, but again Dis took this by a mile, her flow was on point and her structure was right there.
Humor-Disaster of course, some of her lines had me cracking up!!

Disaster blew Siz away with a knockout, I'd be surprised if I got disagreed with, but Disaster took this by a landslide, keep elevating though Siz.

Vote-Disaster for her humorous punches and nice use of vocabulary.
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