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Old 04-10-04, 02:52 PM   #28
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ok heres the whole thing....

My rhymes are Drastic, I'll take you to school, come get your Ass Kicked//
I made the grade, she barely Passed It, I'm Ill enough to make her Class Sic//
Okay nice multi's in it...u had a nice personal...and it was a decent punch 7/10
I Shatter And Bruse, called out Disaster cause I was sick of Battlin Newbs//
I Had Her Confused, she must have thought I was just sick of Battlin Dudes//
Okay another bar with nice multi's...punch was aihgt, it didnt hit too hard 6/10
I Burn Em Out, she's from ATL where they produce shit like Word Of Mouf//
So Would You Please take some Summer's Eve and clean out that Dirty South//
Nice punch, personal, and multi's 9/10
I Maul And Stompin Her, she'll need the police, go Call An Officer//
Aw fuck...... Someone beat me to it, I came to beat the Balls Off Of Her//
Ehh i didnt feel the punch, "balls off her"? i dont get it but u had nice multis again 4/10
Avi says Still Matic, but ya Skills Battered, Rappin? you should Stop Or Pause//
Looks good on the pic, but said herself, In person she recieves Lots Of NAs//
Nice personal, multis, and a hard hitting punch 10/10
I'm Sayin, why's this bitch Beggin, she wants to Spit After Me//
Beat the booty off this bitch? dawg.......I just Disassed Her..... Peace//
An ok closer not to hard hitting...decent 7/10

OVERALL YOU GOT A....
43/60

Trying To Battle With That Weak A$$ Raps You "Bring-Through",/
The Only Ice In Your Life Is Cracking "Beneathe-You",/
Nice punch, some ok multis, pretty decent opener.... 6/10
Nobody Believes You, Cause You Admit I Got 'Game',/
Save Your Live, Back Off The Mic An Just Hang Your Head in 'Shame',/
Nice multis in there, hard hitting punch...was def feeling this bar 9/10No One To Blame Except Your Self For 'This-Shit',/
Picked A Fight With Tom Green And Got 'That-A$$-Whipped',/ (lol)
I'm The Verbal Alpha-Rappa Dominating This Bitch,/
Nice punch with the tom green line i def liked that, ok multis in it...didnt help ya flow with the 3 lines that rhymed...fucked up there 6/10
Pt The Rock Down For A Minute And See,/
My Flows Burn You Worse Than Your 'Venerial-Disease',/
This line was an ok punch, no multis....5/10
You Damn Right I'm Sick, But You Just 'Got-Fucked',/
My Disease Is In My Head, And Your's In 'Your-Butt',/
Not really a hard hitting punch...ur verse is starting to fall off 4/10
I Know Your Pumped Up Now, Your 'GayBoyFriend-Left',/
The Only 187 You Talking Bout Fucking His 'A$$-To-Death'/
lol nice punch this helped your sustainment...10/10
You Can't Defeat This, Better Call A 'Mountie-You-Bitch',/
This Real Americana Mofioso Pimp 'Slappin-You-Trick',/ (LoL)
Nice hard hitting punch...8/10\
Damn It Seem Like You "Burnt-YourSelf-Again",/
I Got More Green In My Name, Than Your "Life-Ever-Did",/
Ok closer...u needed a hotter one to take the battle....5/10

OVERALL YOU VERSE TALLEYS UP AS...
53/80

My vote goes to enygma for a harder verse....disaster u didnt come as hard as u usually do n thats why you didnt get the win....nice battle tho...
no hate just a vote, nice spits yall
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