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Old 04-10-04, 04:00 PM   #13
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Lil Nae, nice verse some creativity but alot of it didnt flow to me like the first two lines which were pretty weak you gotta hitem up wit somptin bad ass so you catch my attention right off, there were a few good punches that could have been worded better but overall not to shabby

props..yo props man nice battle, yor struc worked for ya so thats good all ur bars had somewhat of a punch they were played but still creative, use of vocab was also a plus and ur multis were also good, overall you took this one

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