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Triple N..HOld up hold up, ok for one you buy nouns on wheel of fortune not jepordy. ok number two the A.I.D.S. punch, if seen less gay shit in san fan sisco, and three tyrone hill is defently not as ugly as sam cassell just let that be known...anyways your structre was alright, flowed well in someparts but lil bit sketchy other than them three bull shit lines the rest of ur punches were good

DP420..holla girl fat verse i know you do better than that couple forced multies in there i saw but your punches and personals wer tight..not sure abouth the black on black crime what that had to do with anything unless you both are colored then that would be a alright personal, but overall your flow was way better than triple n's

Vote............Dp420

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