Alright Checckity Checck It lol

Check L.I. Lines:

Look at the name of the thread, you can tell a newbie made it...
Gets worse when ya read ya rhymes cause none ya shits legit...

^^Nice Opener, And Also Nice Punches' ...!!

Shit if you were a ghost, than id be feeling chills down my spine...
But you dont inject fear in us emcees, thats why ur records on a decline...

^^Once Yet Again Nice PunchLine Right There!! Your Heated!!'

Let rap be, it never was intended for the lone start state...
I guess you get the drift now, jus had to be expressed by a heavy weight...

^^But I Agree You Could Fixx Up On Your Closer And Come Better!!

But Over All It Was A Tight Verse' .. And ALso Enjoyable!!!

Ghost You Need To Evelate Kiid!!' ...

But Propz On Both Be-Halvez' ...

Vote: L.I.

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