Alright Vin Peice Of Advice- And I Would Take It If I Were You ... - Look Over Your Flow... Your Recyclin Your Own Lyrics' .. And It Throws Your Verse Off Balance And Shit' Don't Do That' !!! ...

Mcnotorious' ... Alright.. Your Verse Was A Bit Basic.. But Checck The Lines:

cuz im gunna kill you, slice, knife to yo neck//
the only shit you'll ever say on a mic is, "excuse me, can i get a mic check"
when i get done, be as "vintage" as some new shoes//
you'll be over with, like fabolous rappin without a "clue"//

^^Them Were Probably Your Best Lines Right There!!' .. Just Evelate Kiid And You Will Improve You have To Start Some WHere!!!

Check Vin's Lines:

Every line I spit is so fuckin glorious
I seen yo little lines, you must have got yo name cuz yo dick suckins notorious
^Alright PunchLine Right There

Check It Again:

Yeah you hale from brooklyn, but you got no business reppin biggies name
Cuz if bed-sty knew you there's no chance you'd be steppin in this game

^Nice Punchline Right There Its Heated' ...!!! You Would Have Had This As An Easy Win If You Didn't Recycle All Of Your Played Out Lines' .. Kiid!!!

Vote: Mcnotorious

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