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Old 04-10-04, 07:46 PM   #2
Shadows edge
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yo, i think this thing was pretty tight, moreso than the other people make it out like. ghost, i thought that first punch you threw in the opener was really good... the venus/serena-ballerina was actually nice (and that shit does rhyme...) but the rest was not only kinda weak, but not creative, not real worldplay or metas or anything. if you ain't gonna punch hard at least bring something new.

li, yours had some good punches in the begining, flow was pretty ok though not spectacular, then you kinda fell off at the end with 3 bars all on the same diss, kinda stretched it too much with your last two bars and the closer was a bit weak.

even with that, i give the vote to li by a bit for more creativity.

hit up my battles..
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