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Old 04-11-04, 12:06 AM   #24
Oc6 The Caustic
Flyweight
 
Posts: 184
From: Northern California
Ok

IP:

Here we go:

Ghost- You had a good structure and good wordplay. I was feeling your verse more than Gk because you had lots of powerful punches. You need more personals, but you had a few in there, make them stronger. Nice opening and good job on focusing on your oppenent and not going off to your guy's other battle like he did.

Gk- Once again, the same Ghost personal. I don't know if you were the first to say it or what not, but make a more powerful personal, Ghost already saw that one commin'. Don't mention other names or past battles, you need to focus on this battle and nothing else, it threw off your verse. Good punches, but overall, Ghost had the better flow.

Vote: Ghost


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