this shit was defintely one sided... pretty good spit for a newb mcnotorious, you got your flow pretty nice, no horrible problems there. your punches, i see you aiming for them but you gotta get some originality too it.. make it your own like acc:

"Fuck what dis fag-had, his rhymes like "bag-dad", constantly gettin "bombed on"..."

which is nicer, has some nice mutlis and everything.

mcnotorious, work on multis, worldplay, metas and basically your punches will become better for the most part...

return the favor... close that battle against phat especially.. i needs a "w"

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