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Old 04-11-04, 12:57 AM   #9
Sten. Cell
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Like Shadow Said This Battle Was One Sided.Accom Takes This One.He Had A Tight Opening Disses With A Good Follow Up.He Had Some Nice Metas But Some Could Use Work.His Puns Were Strong & His Disses Were Good Too.Some Of His Lines Were A Little Weak & His Ending Was Good.Notorious' Flow Was A Little Choppy Especially With All Those Commas.(You Shouldnt Use Them So Much Because They Break Up Your Sentences.Only Use Then Were You Want To Show Two Seperate Subjects)Some Of His Bars Didnt Rhyme Very Well Or Have Good Transition.He Didnt Have Many Strong Punches And His Complexity & Bar Structure Was Off.

Nice Battle Tho.Jus Elevate Like The Rest Of Us

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