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Old 04-11-04, 01:07 AM   #4
Oc6 The Caustic
Flyweight
 
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From: Northern California
The Results

IP:

Good Battle, Here is my honest results:

Shadow- Great opening, That casey at bat rhyme really set the tone off and made me want to read more, very hot. You had a solid structure and your creativity was also good. Nice choice of words.

"Each verse stinging like killer b’s
You open your mouth and we all catch z’s
Fuck you mother and catch STD’s"

That was a very hard hit. I liked how you stuck with "Letters" for your rhymes, that made that part that much hotter.

Phat- You also had some good punches. You had some multi's, but they weren't as solid as Shadow's. Make sure to go over your spelling errors, I didn't mark this against you however. Good job on reversing some of his hard hits at you, you did a good job at that. Your flow was a little shaky but you got the point out there.

Very good battle. Both of your flows were good. But it came down to you had the better punches and multi's, Shadow also has my vote for his creativity.

Vote: Shadow

Nice battle.
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