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Old 04-11-04, 01:45 AM   #11
Oc6 The Caustic
Flyweight
 
Posts: 184
From: Northern California
my vote:

IP:

Here we go:

Acc- I liked your opening a lot, you had a nice selection of words which flowed nicely together. Your structure was stong also, you had lots of vocab. which fitted together good. You were all about punches this time and you did them well, they were hard hitting and constant, keeping up with the pace. Some good personly's too, nice flow. I would of just done one bar with the white joke, but you worked it out. Good Flow.

McN- Your structure was a little weak and your flow was very average and basic. Be personal, don't have so much "I's" and "You's", get hit where it hurts, just don't put battle rhymes out there that just bounce off him. Expand your vocab a little more, too many easy words and rhymes, I know you can do better then this. Your flow was aight, but Acc took this one.

Vote: Acc, good battle!
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