Mc-well In These Words You Iight For A Newbie Playa...ya Structure Is Nice...ya Got A Good Rhyme Scheme Goin Also.now U Should Work On Bigger Words And Sum Good Punchlines And U'll Be Skr8.

Acc-u Got Good Potential Son....structure Is G'hood...rhyme Scheme Is On Point...punches Is Heavey...this Da First Battle I Peep'd Of Yours And I Like It.you Couldv'e Hit Em Even Harder Wit More Punches And Just Whip'd Em Out...but He A Newbie Like Myself So I Feel Ya.

S0 Imma Break It Down Like This Hea Playa'z
Punches:acc
Flow:acc
Creativity:acc
Multi'z:acc
Structure:tie
Overall Vote:acc

*be Sure To Stop Thru And Vote Honestly On My Battle:regulator Vs C_r_e_a_m