dawg u think u can fuk wit dis shyt come get it
after im done spittin ill have u throwin a fit
boring...
i keep my shyt for real n at a steady pace
come on ill take u to r kelly n he can have his way wit ur face
boring...
dawg u challengin me u must be blazin
ill rip u up worst then freddy would do jason
boring...
i garuntee that record wont stay 11 and three
cuz ur fukin wit a man that u jus cant be
ok finally you come at him with a punch.. but this could mean his record gonna be 12-3.. gotta go somewhere with that
a king of this shyt and u dont wanna admit it
now heres a lil gift
a loss in ur column from this lyrically insane shit
yeah... ok...
overall man you just need to elevate... you opened just boring, overused stuff. work on coming straight at him with punches, get creative with multis, worldplay, stuff like that.
"Boy calls himself raw talent...well your now getting cooked...
Never make it on this site, cause all dope emcee spots r booked..."
that one line took the battle, could have stopped reading there.
v/ LI
hit my battle back v phat mic or LE... crew battles now i guess so i know it'll be honest vote
