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Old 04-11-04, 05:41 PM   #17
Oc6 The Caustic
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Shadow- You started out ok, then got stronger as you went on. You had some good punches too, try to make them a little bit harder though.
"even if your rubber suit was on, my rhymes too hot to adjust to
n even if my rhymes was a dime a dozen you could afford just two"

That line was ill, good hit. I think you could of ended off better though, but good flow.

Stan. Cell- I was really feelin your intro:
Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle/
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow/

That is a great use of wordplay right there, it flowed together very good, way to go by setting it off. What I was really liking about your verse though was your Multi's, you had lots of them and they were looking good. You had good punches, I felt that they could of been better. I think you had some alright personaly's too. Here it is, because this was a good battle:


Flow - Stan. Cell
Punches - Shadow
Personals - Tie
Multies - Stan Cell
Vocab - Stan Cell
Originality - Shadow

So after my explanation:
Vote- Stan. Cell

GOOD BATTLE!
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