your rythmes are so simple you should go join simple plan//
ya baught your ryhmes for 99cent was called shit in a can//
at the dollastore that you hustle in front off u aint on my level//
PIMPIN up the bitches the oldest on you pimped was twelve//
tellin em you work for Santa and you one of his little elves//
take her back home and then you start spittin your shit//
she just sits their and laughs and asks you if that is it//
tells ya she heard better rymes on barney and friends//
thought your rap career just started but this is the end//
you walked into Front Lines and everyone just laughed//
not cuz you looked dumb we just never seen a black graffi//
Im Rippin you 2 peices in this battle teach ya a leasson//
once your done readin this your gun start second guessin//
that you need a new wardrobe cuz you look like a hoe//
you also should invest in some new rythmes and a flow//
you couldnt be saved if we rushed you to a hospital//
should look up a new website or maybe go into gospol//
your rap record about to be 1-2 and ima gun be reasponsible//

iight verse the rhyme pattren was too simple tho

e.g can plan, it shit.

come on dog get some vocab, read a dictionary or summit lol naa but seriously u need beta vocab

aka punches hit harder, and were more personal
vote a.k.a

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