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Old 04-11-04, 09:27 PM   #5
Cythis
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shadow- ya verse was good, nice meti's, nice flow
easy reader, i dig the intro, everything flows

"sten cell like bruce willis, cats about to die hard
each time i spit a bar, i leave you scarred, n ego charred"

from here to the end a nice drop, the end slight weaker then the intro
but still nice6/10

Sten. good punches, and alot of meti's like it all, but i believe that good
meti's should not only be powerfull but easy to read, i didnt like the flow
too much stop and go's, didnt feel it, 5/10

nice funny!!!!!
"Kid Dont Fight It,Your Suited For A Bruisin Like White Tie & Tails
Its Easy To Tell Your Tastin De-Feet Like Bitin Toe Nails"

weak line, Weak Intro
"Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow"
this killed ya whole thing for me!!!!!

Vote: Shadows Edge