ANIMAL-
ive decided this time ima tell you what wrong wit ya battle

THIS!!!!!!!!!!!
"Im an evil thing from beneath the earth//
I spread like wild fire like Ive been cursed//
Ive been cast out by the devil //
I eat to much red meat//
Am gonna threaten ya fire//
with every girls desire//
am gonna giveum ya phone number so you expire//
In the heat of the firey sun//
am gonna snap ever finger even ya thumb//
while i get out a glook and skweas the triger//
and blow a piece of ya liver//"

1. try to actually throw punches at him
you said alot of things, you got the flow going, but u should try make it personal(you must include him)
2. you basically just wrote a pretty poem, this is a battle and
kid he destroyed you,
3. their is somewhere on this site a place where you can get help if your struggling
you should read it, i think its on the Emcee Introduction page(dont qoute me)
cuz im not sure,(something about punches....)

for your verse i give you 1/10 for flow

a cubed- nice the whole thing had nice flow, punches, alot was funny
easy to read,
this was good though a bit boring, could pick up a bit on meti's and wordplay
"Animal thinks he can jus go out and bust G's//
When he doesnt even no how to SHELL PEAS//
Your writin style is so god damned ridiculous//
ive herd your lines before...now ain that conspicuous!"

but honestly that was fu**ing good(maybe its just his verse that makes urs looks so damn good)
here is ya score------7/10

vote A-Cubed