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Old 04-11-04, 09:01 PM   #23
Cythis
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shadow- nice intro, you stuck it, nice flow, good word play
ya controled this from the start

bad meti's
got no talent so you wishing it was me that fucked your mother
this shits meticulous, metaphors ridiculous that make your mind’s engine sputter //

good outro, 7/10

Limited edition- didnt feel it, you had some punches, but they fell of
good intro followed by a weak outro, that put me off, you could try keep
the good punches and cut out on the complicated ones, they stuned the whole thing

best line
"Fail to see the dangers, my razors slice you till ya rotten
Ya may as well give up like other herbs...you WILL be forgotten"
but it's lines like these that i didnt like at all
"You called my crew a 'clan', but this ain' Everquest, bro
Call yourself darkness, but the only black spot is my soul"
to me that shit's just wack-4/10

vote Shadows Edge