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Old 04-11-04, 09:19 PM   #14
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Breakdown,

Real..AAAAAAHHH SHORT LINES...I hate short lines your structre sucked so it was hard to flow i didnt see that many punches for the half a paragraph you had sorry dawg elevate 4/10

Caustic..Hotness flow struc punch personals metas and multies all hot ness ...verse flowed off da tounge pretty well punches hit hard and personals
This muthafuckin' doggie has me guessin' if he is a new breed/
Bitch try to bite my style, you'll be at the vet's with fuckin' rabies/
^^^Opener was tight as hell good to start off killen this guys 8/10

Vot Oc6 da caustic
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