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Old 04-11-04, 09:22 PM   #15
E Looch
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oc6 had a nice battle verse had good punchs and plenty of personals how a batttle verse post to be and he had good structure
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Bitch I write shit on the spot, but you could become filled with my lead/
I didn't ask this bitch to do a trick, he just decided to play dead/

doggy need to work on that structure shit is hard to read flowed pretty well and had a couple of punches overal not a bad verse
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whoops u dun said it/bitch u gonna regret it/dis battles funny cause all ur wack rymes r pathetic
vote/oc6
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