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Old 04-11-04, 10:42 PM   #27
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shadow- okay solid, structure was off a little which made it hard for me to try to make it flow. vocabulary was on the down side. you wasnt very consistent with the punches. my favorite line was the line about the talent and he wishing you f.cked his mother. no multies....but u did good with the personals. ...elevate and work on the multies and vocab and wordplay.

limited- your verse was solid too. structure was on the okay level. it made yours flow a little bit better. vocabulary was okay. you wasnt strong on the personals like shadow was. i rate all your punches at the same calibur, none were really that bad. well for this battle personals were your biggest problem...

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