I agree wit Krysis...well i was jst like you...who wasn't? but just make your lines more clear like:

"Yo! LKD in the spot to be! And all y'all lil shorties come flock to me!//
Yeah i keep it raw, no i keep it real,//
no none of y'all niggas here know the deal!//"

do it like that...and elavate..alot!!!