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Old 04-12-04, 04:16 PM   #6
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
Posts: 941
From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for he-man:

flow:good job nice flow 7/10

volcab:average nothing really to say 5/10

punchesretty tame nothing that really hurt best line,"Hopin 4 Strength In Number? He-Man Vs Insane # 16....???" 6/10

overall:18/30 tighten up those punches

breakdown for insane16:

flow:no real flow really long lines and nothing to tie them together 4/10

volcab:alright use i think you overextended what you should though cause of the spelling mistakes but 6/10

punches:best line,"so now ima slaughter this nigga like droppin big boy on a heard of cattle" not great but different nothing else really stood out here 5/10

overall:15/30 really not enough to win here

vote--heman gets my vote
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league