wow decent topic so here goes the way i saw shit

vilotion to va not bad for your first topical drop you need to work on multis seriously elevate the vocab and work on the structure try to stay focused on what you are writing you seemed to get side tracked but keep dropping ish
4/10

L.I nice topic as i said before you stayed on point painted a good visual of what your flow was about ok vocab decent multis nice structure good battle fellas just keep elevating and dropping ish
7/10