OK BAR BY BAR BREAKDOWN.....

You should do like a ghost and dissapear ..when it comes to me im ya main primal fear...
i see you stratin to shake when i come near...Battlin me is a bad choice i kould be the end of ya career..
Played out punch on ghost...ok vocab...
when i spit i might as well put my words on top of your head... cause theyre too complicated for you ..what i write with this lead..
my words will put a niggas career in trauma ... wit my wordplay im more fierce and despised than that nigga osama...
career in trauma...u basically stated that in your opener...nice punch tho...
dont strat cryin afterwards cuz i dont want no drama... i got enuff of it after your daddy found out i was sleepin wit yo mama...
nice multi's...ok punch
ghost you made the wrong choice battlin me.. im postin up in this bitch for everyone to see...
that how sick i can really be... by the end of my flow ill be wanted by every crew and that i can gaurantee...
no punch in here..ok multi's
But now im unleashin the wordplay of a genius in a 15 yr olds brain... tryin to keep wit my words is drivin you insane...
what you lack i pick up in and get stronger.. ya verse is too plain..
stretched line...boring punch...blah blah...
You aint even posted yet but im callin it a victory... kuz ya styles more sloppier than a college dormitory...
nice closer...sorta played tho

listen it aint a nigga in the game that can see me/
nope u cant beat me better get 3 more wishez from a jeanie/
rush niggaz like dwight freeny leave u ass naked wearin a beanie/
gay punch...ok flow
u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/
but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/
nice set up line but ur punch was wack
so keep plotin on a victory an ill smash that pronto/
1 win got u thankin u a warrior like tonto/
sigh...
got 2 gunz to give u shotz like a pair of free throwz/
wash the blood off my shirt and it turn to indigo/
fallin asleep now....
flippin on niggaz like jack nicholson in the shinin/
come on now that shit u spitin u call that rhymin?/
nice punch...
like glass u just see threw so i must be diamond/
dont call me playstation just cause im in the game/
blah didnt rhyme...
yo old rapz need restoration im heatin em wit the flame/
wit no hesitation them pistolz iz tearin u out the frame
Zzzzz...

Ok vote - Nope
ghost fix ya structure...werk on everything cuz u verse is a chore to read....nope werk on usin better personals...ok im out

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