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Old 04-12-04, 06:55 PM   #3
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Alright JPoll!!!!!!!! I'll Hit You Up With Some FeedBack On Your Verse & Yes I Did Read It' lol Was A Bit Whack & Dis-Organized!! But Let Me Break It Down To You!!

Check JPoll's Lines:

I’m too much to handle, you’re socks with sandles,
I’m a blast in chernobyl, you’re just a candle,

^^Alright Multies! Wheres The Punch? Not A Good Opener!! 4/10

This is pointless, you’re jointless, you can’t even bend,
It’s almost like you’ve got arthritis, in your pen

^^Alright There Is A Decent Bar & A Good Punch!! Nice, Playa 8/10

You’re poor and hungry, while I’m in my sauna,
If people where countries, you’d be Botswana,

^^Im Saying WTF?? 2/10

Something went wrong with you, when, I’m not sure,
Maybe back when there turned into thurr,

^^Shit Went Off Line There Fixx It Up 2/10

Wrapped up in yourself like you’re practicing yoga,
Kids all yelling boo, like it was the end of Octobah.

^^A Good Closer' Better Then Most Of Your Lines..!! But Yet Again Wheres The "Punch" ....!! 6/10

I Thought You Could Have Done Alot Better!!!! Work On Your Skills' .. EveryBody Has Something That They Can Get Better At.. I Wasnt Feeling Your Flow Though!!' .. So I Had To Give It To CarsonJet!!!!! ... I Mean You Had A Nice Structure But Something Went Wrong In Your Verse!!!!' .....

Evelate Kiid!!! ... There Is My Advice To You!!' .. SInce You Were Looking Forward To It!!! ... (No Disrespect) You Had Some Clean Lines In Your Verse' . But Not Many!!
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