ok ok bar by bar breadkown...
JPoll, Scar'd from birth now u spitin wit no net'worth...
for what it's worth...you aint the first, 38 came before your merk....
Nice opener...hot multi's...good little punch...9/10
Got u beggin for thirst, way ya need ta feed off my verse'
aint gotta come hard...n still sideline this herb like Garrison Hearst...
Another hot bar with nice multi's and a hard hitting punch...also nice meta..9/10
Cus you's a tourists here, I mean dawg look at you...
What u call the streets...I call 5th Avenue...
Nice punch....7/10
It's simple arithmatic, 5-0 poll no J cus I simply ripped da bitch...
An I lay low wit plastic hips..Merked by my best minus 4/5ths....
Nice personal...hard hitting punch...nice multi's...10/10
I know's ya style, your probly gonna wanna speak bout all ya guns...
which ones? I kno...every cracker's dream of holdin Ak's an 8 plus 1's...
Nice closer...hard hitting punch...9/10
Score...
44/50
Ok carson...not really much advice needed...all i suggest is using more personals....nice spit...enjoyed it....
keep droppin....
I’m too much to handle, you’re socks with sandles,
I’m a blast in chernobyl, you’re just a candle,
Ok...u had some multis..boring punches though..5/10
I’m a high speed roadster that’s too fast for sight,
You’re just a toaster set on light,
Ehh toaster...boring punch...plus flow was off on that...4/10
This is pointless, you’re jointless, you can’t even bend,
It’s almost like you’ve got arthritis, in your pen,
ok punch...nice multi's...6/10
You’re poor and hungry, while I’m in my sauna,
If people where countries, you’d be Botswana,
boring punches...3/10
Something went wrong with you, when, I’m not sure,
Maybe back when there turned into thurr,
Ehh doesnt really make sense...2/10
Wrapped up in yourself like you’re practicing yoga,
Kids all yelling boo, like it was the end of Octobah.
Ok decent punch...nice closer...7/10
Score...
27/50
ok...first off work on using personals....ur pretty straight in the multi category...werk on direct punches....personals will help with getting direct punches....stick wit people on ya own level....keep elevatin kid...
ull get better
Vote - Carson
return the favor in my topical with violatin-to-va....crew votes r allowed...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118924
by the way im not gonna poll my vote on here until i figure out if crew votes r allowed in this battle.....are they??