Im Going To Have To Give This To!! Young Renegade!! lol.. Dude Took This Battle! Off Hand

Yo Young renegade, waz it your mom i just laid?
Heres My spade, u gonna need it,
ya only leavin in ma hurse, so go get busy, use ya purse

^But What The Fuck Is Up With These 3Lines'!! I Mean C'Mon' ... 0/10

this keith guy your gay lover? u sure like 2 talk
U probly bend him over an fuckin shove in ya stalk

^Good Punchline!!' ... 9/10

Go stand in that Hole u dug, u sure your happy with it?
I'll Make sure Keiths lyin at your side, peace out bro, go liv it

cuz renegade why u ever think you'd win this battle
It'll teach u next time not 2 mess with da G-Rattle

^ A Weak Closer!! But Got You The Win' ..!! 8/10

An Alright Verse OverAll Im Going To Have To Say

Now Check Young Renegade's Lines:

ayo, im the renegade,im standin here in my b-boy stand/
u the rattle? oh u a baby, nowonder u pissin in ya pants/

^ A Very Weak Opener Could Have Improved On That Shit 7/10

i spit that shit that make eminem look non noncontroversial/
bust on ya girls face so she look like she from a noxima commerical/

^ A Very Hot Line And Also Good Punch!! 10/10

Ayo im a real gangsta ill throw ya body in the luandry hamper/
U just a lil kid still crawlin around in pampers/

^Fairly Good!!! But Just O.K For Me!! 7/10

fuck u, shit im done wit this gay ass battle/
Why am i wastin my time wit a dude who still play wit a rattle/

^Funny Closer!! It Was Aight' ... 9/10


How It Goes Down..!!! ' ' ' G-Rattle Evelate Kiid' ...!! And You Will Improve EveryBody Starts Off At A "Level" And EveryBody Could Work On Something!! That They Can Improve On!!!

But Ya'll Had Nice Structure & A Nice Flow!! I Will Give You That!!!

Good Battle On Both Sides!!

Vote: Young Renegade!!

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(Honest Votes Plz) .... Thanks

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