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Old 04-12-04, 08:56 PM   #60
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IAgh Aight check dis

Enygma hot punches in da beginin but at da end and middle you, you strayed off and lost my attentiion flow was aight and struc was good just gotta work on punches keepin up, use better vocab and more creativity...

Dp nice verse flowed well even though the lack of punches hurt you somewhat the mulites mad up for it...struc was good and..even though self glorification isnt a battle aspect you managed to do that well and dis enygma at da same time...

Overall Enygma 7/10 Dp 8/10

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