Alright No 'Bull-Shit' ... Im Going To Give This Shit ! To Accomp For The Fact That His' .. Punches Hit Harder & Connected If That!!' ..

Checck These Lines For Good Punchlines & A Good Opener:

Ya stepped to quick to get hurt, vets like me dispurse of da rest...
I merk who is left, its likeya "heart is a magnet" the way theese "bullets" hitten ya "chest"...


Fag, verse isnt noticed if you typed in bold, cuz you puttin ya "hands" around "heads", aint mean you give "choke holds"...
my freestyles is "ill" off da "dome", like i gotta "head cold".../

^Nice Use Of Multies! & Good WordPlay' ....!!!

Licken ya wounds and talkin shit, avoiden my beatin Aint-helpin-it...
cuz ya be seein I.C.U. more than the fucken Alphabet...

^ I Like The Closer!! Nice Shit' ... Playa..!! I Enjoyed Your Verse But You Need To Work On Your Structure & Flow!!!!


Shadows edge!! : You Need To Work On Your WordPlay & Vocab

Vote: Accomplishment!!

(Well explained Vote)

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