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Old 04-12-04, 09:30 PM   #13
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for baller_84106:

flow:mah nothing special on for the most part but there was some weak spots 5/10

volcabretty average up this if you ever want to compete against the top of the site 5/10

punches:you talked way too much at the start about your self what was that about four or five lines of it?? really you shouldn't do that in battles especially in a short text battle like this best line,"that u and ya punches are missed like shaqs free throws/" played topic but most of your lines were 6/10

overall:17/30 alright verse you should enter the battle league on this board that would be a good place to tighten up your skills

breakdown for murdera:

flow:basic and off for the most part really gotta work on this 4/10

volcab:nothing great again work on this 5/10

punches: nothing that hurt your oppenent at all the best line was that flip on his shaq line and even that was feeding off his verse and your not suppose to do that so 5/10

overall:14/30 really needs alot of work but you should sign up for the battle league the experience will help you there

vote--baller_84106 took this he kinda ran away with it being that murdera didn't really throw much for punches
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league