breakdown for G-Rattle:
flow:straight flow worked through the whole peice good job !! 7/10
volcab
retty basic but it gets the job done 6/10
punches:nothing really i didn't see much aside from jokes bout his girl you know how much that's been done pretty played out 5/10
overall:18/30 pretty good mechanics and all that but your punches could use some work
beakdown for violation-to-va:
flow
retty good throughout your verse alittle room to improve but 7/10
volcab
retty basic room to improve here 6/10
punches:you flipped some of his lines not bad, you didn't really do anything else though aside from more girl jokes you two are really hard on each others girl, really work on this for gettin some new orignal punches 6/10
overall:19/30 i gave you an extra point for the flip on his line cause some body's gotta win right??
vote-- violation-to-va both of you keep workin on your shit