i changed my title !!
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breakdown for shadows edge:
flow:good flow no off spots at all nothing too complex but good job 6/10
volcab:alright use still kinda basic but 6/10
punches:nothing he really that i see hurting you mainly talked bout your self being better nothing really bout him 4/10
overall:16/30 no punches to speak of but alright mechanics
breakdown for VC:
flow:most of it was ill like styles 2,3 ,5 but 1 and 4 were basic and maybe even alittle off, justm y opinion but the ill spots give you 8/10
volcab:amazing use through style 2 and 4 i think it was the most keep up the work 8/10
punches:my fav line," hope u got *gecko* cuz imma get u **accidents**,and cause problems like drew *bledsoe* i coudla told you nigga,that you lost from the *get~go*" you had some other solid ones nice job 7/10
overall:23/30 solid verse you should sign up for my text league on this site cause you would be a good addition we need talent like this
vote--VC just ran away with this not a bad verse by shadow but damn
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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