breakdown for lil'skip:

flow: really long bars without any use of mutlis or nothing to help out the flow nothing here 3/10

volcab:alright use pretty basic though 6/10

punches:some nice lines the best part of your verse, "u rap like a mix of fresh prince and the village boys, the only difference is u use bigger and better gay sex toyz/" best line 6/10

overall:15/30 some worked needed before you can really be a contender on this board

breakdown for VC:

flow:solid nice use of multis in the end bars to tighten that flow 8/10

volcab:good use not as good as i've read in verses of yours but alright 6/10

punches:best line,"u aint in the game,you 3rd string,go shit ya ass on the bleachers/" you had a nice amount of them again alittle less then i've since you post but 6/10

overall:20/30 great verse

vote--the punches and multis are what edge this battle apart vs gets my vote, why don't you try and battle someone more then one of these newbies

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league