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Old 04-13-04, 02:50 AM   #10
Afterword
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yo ima go with the notorious one
he didnt do it in a BIG way but to me it was efficient
fav line:
"look at yo name, your mom shouldn't have named you...
you couldnt be at my level, if we was in the same room..."

both had a koo flow althogh it was a lil simplistic
skillz verse was structured better and rhymed smooth but lacked gud content
needed more vocab, multies, imagery and harder punches
i say skillz probley has the nicer flow, but skillz does't get my vote
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